WSL 2008

Mieliśmy wątpliwości, co do formy naszego zadania pisemnego dla Walczyńskiego. Napisałam więc do niego maila (tak wiem, że jestem odważna:P). Odpisał mi następująco:

"Otoz Panstwa zadaniem na przyszly tydzien jest napisanie pracy (paragrafu), w ktorej opisujecie Panstwo swoja jedna ceche charakteru. Ma to miec forme paragrafu.

Wzorem niech bedzie nastepujacy paragraf (ktory pisze na poczekaniu):

One of my personal features that I try to fight with is my shyness.
The fact that I easily get shy may be observed, for example, when I am introduced to new people. I am usually quite afraid to start talking to them although after a while I can exchange "small talk" with them. What is more, my shyness is visible when I am at school and the teachers ask me some questions. I, in many cases, know the answers but I am too shy to express them openly. Finally, I am a shy person and therefore the number of my friends is not too impressive. I have only three friends who, knowing that I am quite coy, do not try to change me.
As I have demonstrated above, I am a shy person and this fact sometimes makes my life really hard.

Topic sentence:
One of my personal features that I try to fight with is my shyness.
Supporting sentences:
Point 1:
The fact that I easily get shy may be observed, for example, when I am introduced to new people. I am usually quite afraid to start talking to them although after a while I can exchange "small talk" with them.
Point 2:
What is more, my shyness is visible when I am at school and the teachers ask me some questions. I, in many cases, know the answers but I am too shy to express them openly.
Point 3:
Finally, I am a shy person and therefore the number of my friends is not so impressive. I have only three friends who, knowing that I am quite coy, do not try to change me.
Concluding sentence:
As I have demonstrated above, I am a shy person and this fact sometimes makes my life really hard.


Mam nadzieje, ze powyzszy paragraf pomoze. Prosze miec tylko wzglad na to, iz pisalem go na poczekaniu.

Z sobotnio-wieczornymi pozdrowieniami,
MW

p.s. Handout 3 przesle do wtorku/srody."

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Mam nadzieję, że teraz nikt nie będzie miał wątpliwości ze to ma być 1 paragraf (a nie 5 )

Pozdrwawiam,
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